|Reviews for Unloyal|
| Rikaura 11/2/04 . chapter 1
:o *hopes it's not me x.x* nice poem! Really a sad poem, but I liked it! :)
| joie 610 8/4/03 . chapter 1
what a deep poem! i like it. it's so true... you've put everything together perfectly... and i really like the line "you being the parasite/made me the host." great job!
| Damaged 7/5/03 . chapter 1
I hate it when this happens. Backstabbers are SO ANNOYING! _ I hate it how when a friendship's trusted and everything is given to make it last, and the other person just decides to do this. Awesomely written.
| Free-Writer 7/3/03 . chapter 1
I can definately relate to this. I have had a number of people who have forced me to end friendship with them. Great job.
| lainxauber 7/2/03 . chapter 1
Reminds me of someone I knew...but I think we were both doing the backstabbing. A friendship just doesn't work out when you have absolutely nothing in comon, such as in my case. I think we both wanted out. Great poem on the hardships of human relationships.
| mizu no kokoro 6/30/03 . chapter 1
O.O no REALLY? WHA sniff, i, feel sad... T.T
| torn shadow 6/29/03 . chapter 1
yeah, i hate betrayal also. and it can ruin so much in yourself and other's lives, as well as friendships, like you wrote about. nice job.
| wildtenderness 6/28/03 . chapter 1
was beautiful!very nicely-written!i hate backstabbers and all those unloyal people!the thought of them just make me wanna puke!ugh,i absolutely love this poem!great your choice of words and very effective!
| Falling Stars 6/27/03 . chapter 1
Very well written! It reminded me a lot of something that happened to me a while ago... Anyways, that was good!