:o *hopes it's not me x.x* nice poem! Really a sad poem, but I liked it! :)

what a deep poem! i like it. it's so true... you've put everything together perfectly... and i really like the line "you being the parasite/made me the host." great job!

I hate it when this happens. Backstabbers are SO ANNOYING! _ I hate it how when a friendship's trusted and everything is given to make it last, and the other person just decides to do this. Awesomely written.

I can definately relate to this. I have had a number of people who have forced me to end friendship with them. Great job.

Reminds me of someone I knew...but I think we were both doing the backstabbing. A friendship just doesn't work out when you have absolutely nothing in comon, such as in my case. I think we both wanted out. Great poem on the hardships of human relationships.

O.O no REALLY? WHA sniff, i, feel sad... T.T

yeah, i hate betrayal also. and it can ruin so much in yourself and other's lives, as well as friendships, like you wrote about. nice job.

was beautiful!very nicely-written!i hate backstabbers and all those unloyal people!the thought of them just make me wanna puke!ugh,i absolutely love this poem!great your choice of words and very effective!

Very well written! It reminded me a lot of something that happened to me a while ago... Anyways, that was good!