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Reviews For: The Adventures of Jordan Baldric

C.R. Diamond
2007-07-06
ch 1,
abuseCool idea, a sort of look at the classic pirate stories. I know the feeling, one cannot do school, life, video games, and writing at once. What helps me though, it to limit the video games. Remember playing in someone else's world is fun, but playing in your world is even more fun. What I mean by that is that video games can offer an escape, it's a limited escape. Your own imagination on the other hand, can offer a limitless escape. Don't forget to pay your taxes, and eventually you'll want a girlfriend. Keep writing.
Thorn of a Rose
2004-01-25
ch 2,
abuseif the finger was invented then, I would have fingered them and cursed them in 5 different languages.
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