Ah, I like LP, they entertain me. One of my favorite songs was by them, though it took me two years to realize it. ^_^;; Anyway, this was fun to read, I certainly wasn't expecting the ending. It was darker than what I've read lately but still entertaining. I'm open minded though, I like to read all different kinds of things. First person's an interesting thing to read as well. Wow, my thoughts are so jumbled that it's hard to write this review, just thought you'd be delighted to know I'm forcing myself to sit still and actually write this review ^_^ Well, must be off. Ciao!! Great job.

Hey, that was great : D

...I haven't reviewed this?? Why haven't I reviewed this?! I suck! But unlike me, this rocks! EE, it's so... angsty. I love it. *applause* You deserve a cookie. *looks over the story again* EE! Mindgasm!

It's more than a little rattling, more than just "wow". This is a perfect piece of what some people have for a reality, and I love every inch of it. Awesome job.

~Gabby

I could see where the LP-induced depression kicked in. It was an unexpected turn from the intended fluffiness of a regular morning, but it was good sort of ‘unexpected’. I liked how it was written, it was very clean and neat, like notebook paper that hasn’t been scribbled and doodled on yet. I’m sort of surprised that your fic is error-proof, I usually pick at spelling and grammar mistakes, but you’re pretty much on the safe zone in that department. ^-^

I wouldn’t call it ‘uber angst’, but it _is_ effectively dark. Not as dark as it could’ve been, but that’s a good thing. ‘Trying to be dark’ and ‘being dark’ is just that, it has to be natural, unlike some fics that seem rather strained and forced with ‘dark’ elements, but your ‘dark’ was satisfying without overdoing it.

Then ending it with ‘And I woke up.’ was truly evil. >_< Dude, I’m liking you already.

hey. You know I love it. ^-^ It makes me happy.

wow. i wanna read the next part!