Hey, the story is good. Just please update soon! I wanna know what happens next! So please update! For your fans and me too! I'll be waiting for the upcoming chapters! See you on your next chapter, if ever you'll plan to update. =) hehe anyway, see you.

please please please continue with this story!

i wish u luck on your writing!

Great beginning, it's really cute, but chh, good charlotte?

This is really good, I can't wait for the next chapter!

lol, fun! wdnt it b clearer to put thoughts in italics? jst an idea *shrugs* n im not saying it dsnt work as it is. i like it tho! heh, n good charlotte, i love that song! n u have a joel plushie?? i think i'd rather hav one of krad.. or, even, riku n kiley! ^_^

Hi! Please update! This story looks interesting... ^_^

MUST HAVE MORE!WAH!I heart this story...too cute!Have a nice day!

Yayayaya...^_^;; Hehe, I think this story's fantastic! Keep writing please!

Hey, this is a really good story, you should continue it!! The storyline seems cool, and I think it could develop into something really good. Man, you really got some good stories going on don't you?

stupid computer says i can't review twice.. well let it try to stop me..
now you!
why are you so cruel?
it's been so long!
please update soon..
taga-ilog
p.s. yuck. did i sound like a brat?

nice writing style :) write on!

please please please update this one.. its so cute.. ehehe..

ehehehe!! i like this!
.. i hope you update soon! i foresee that this fic manga is gonna be a great success =]

You're SO cruel!
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Please! I really really really like this!
Peony

*growls* UPDATE! PLEASE! I LOVE THIS STORY! EVEN THOUGH IT'S ONLY THE FIRST CHAPTER! ...
can i have krad? please? he sounds kinda like one of my characters. yay! more cute guys to worship! *starts bowing on all fours*