Even though I played Zelda (LZOT), I have difficulty grasping, linking those images. The usage of words is of course beautiful. "Fallen/In the light"; so eccentric! So visionnary! When I read it again I might understand better.

Bravo.

You are so good! I love every word in every line!

You are too negative about the title! It is a very interesting one and I like it! lol I am horrible at thinking up titles you seem to do a MUCH better job then me! Then again a creative mind like yours could always think up something even more amazing i guess!

Great poem it is really well written!

pretty pink:)

Awesome work, again. You're extremely talented.

Oh, I love LoZ, and this poem is so wonderful as well...*reads it again* But no, I don't think it needs a better title. The one you have now is great! 'Golden Darkness'? How did you think of that-it's great. Kind of like a golden cage, but a cage nonetheless...sorry, babbling.

Good poem (and good title, don't worry)

winged one

Wow! This was fantastic work. I like the title you have. I wouldn't change it.

Heart of the Sword