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Reviews For: The Secrets of Thornwood Hall
Little Comet 2007-05-02 . chapter 1
This chapter is really good, but it seems like there should be another one to follow it. Will that happen some time in the future?
Cha Oseye Tempest Thrain 2004-07-14 . chapter 1
Nice... I hope you're planning to update soon. Normally I'm not a fan of the passive... but when you're trying to create a spooky atmosphere, it often works.
lacy 2003-12-14 . chapter 1
eep! scary. more please!
You Need More Flair 2003-07-13 . chapter 1
I wish this had a follow-up piece *hint*.

I like it. I felt like I was there with them as G.A. Katharine came to get em. Veddy good.
ChocolateEclar 2003-06-28 . chapter 1
Spooky! ^_-
Fran Eckard 2003-06-28 . chapter 1
An entertaining first chapter :) This has all the ingredients for a good haunted house story. The location, the circumstances, the characters – its all spot on. You also put in a fair amount of detail about the house too. Perhaps in the second chapter we can see more of the parents as well as the sisters, and some good family interaction :)
Liriel87 2003-06-28 . chapter 1
i like it, its cute.
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