Wow. I try really hard not to use that in reviews.

This is *!@£~#! brilliant. I think that the day you start writing whole fiction and posting it on Fictionpress will be a very happy day for me. *hint*

I love the bridge between the two momenys, the repetition, the everything about it. The way it is poetry yet structurally it is more prose. If this was a real incident, you've done it justice. I just know you have.

'...tentative, and imagined
that we were lovers in love.'

'... with a grin in your voice'

'...and I felt the twist in my chest at your nearness; yet you were farther away than I could reach,
I knew this, and found refuge in silence.'

Just a few of my favs.

You're so good. Come back with more.

i smile because i know you. most of all because the world will know you too. i love this poem.