SCORE! lol jk ;) woo, nice work. cool poem with definitely a twist at the end. good job! and i think i've reviewed all your poems- yay! they were all good &D keep it up!

That ending was unexpected. Keep writing, you're good.

kool A question: why am i ALWAYS sugar high when readin' ur fics?... * gets run over by a car*

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SEE WHAT I MEAN?

That was a cool twist at the end.

Heart of the Sword

lmao, very cute, love the imagery in the begining and then the turn around at the end, muchly enjoyed this, awesome job