wow.. okay normally haikus are much too short to explain anything and i don't usually like them... but the collection you have here is wonderful! with so many together like this it makes for a really mysterious and almost fantasy like story. great work!

Very creative. I especially like this one: "Run around farther./Will I ever find the end?/Run around faster." It represents so many things for me...the world, the tendency of human nature's curiousity, humanity's desperation to know, to improve, to be better, always striving for perfection...@.@ Ok, maybe I would/could/should stop thinking right...about...now. Wonderful job.

~Ari

i love this its so good, very creative. :D

~*~erika~*~

ps. you reviewed my stories and i thought i should inform you that theres more! lol Hybrid Theory; The Soul Keeper is up with more chapters and so is Love Me through it All if you want to check those out.

Interesting format of haiku you utilized to complete the theme of this poem...loneliness i suppose?

very nice, great use of words.

This was some great work.


~Heart of the Sword

Hi. I just want to say thank you because you always come and review my writings. I feel so bad because I don't review your stuff as much. This Haiku was great. It really was.