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| WhiteRequiem 2004-01-28 ch 1,  | abuseI like this one. The first haiku creates a good description while the second haiku really intensifies the image of the waterfall. |
| Ian Shweltser 2004-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOh that was really good aswell. I really liked the fourth and sixth lines. THey were awesome. |
| Dancinggal5389 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseMore incredible words. You have a way of taking something average and making it sound amazing. Tres excellent |
| MR.SEAN 2003-12-11 ch 1, | abuseThat one is cool, I like it. I like thunder, and H20 is a positive! So... GO YOU! :) :) ~SHAZAAM~ |
| Lina Inverse 2003-12-09 ch 1, | abuseVery vivid imagery there |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-09-30 ch 1, | abuseWATER! WATER!! WATER RULZ! YYAAYY~ |
| Anagronax 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseKyah! Sugoi! The portayal of a waterfall has been nicely done. The last line is nifty! |
| wanderingcloud 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseA perfect description of a waterfall, I particularly like the last two lines "To a rising cloak of spray/One voice of thunder." That line really makes me envision this waterfall... Good job! |
| swift sky silver 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abuseit's so descriptive in such a short poem=0) |
| PurpleLilac 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseCool! I already feel the sprays in my face! |
| Keep it 100 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abuse"One voice of thunder" |