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| dear bones 2004-12-11 ch 1,  | abuseOh my gosh, this is beautiful. I've never written a haiku before, but after reading this I felt inspired. I have a poem called 'Tattered Wings' as well but yours is much better. I love this so much, it only has twelve words and it's so powerful, you are amazing. |
| carmice3 2004-01-24 ch 1, | abuseYou will love again. Give the wings time to heal. |
| Ian Shweltser 2004-01-15 ch 1, | abuseOH that as really nice aswell. THough i did prefer other ones, but still that was good. |
| Premeditated Chaos 2003-11-20 ch 1, | abuseFirstly, thanks for the review. It warms my heart to see people respond to my stuff :) Second...I always drop a review back, so here I am, and I am impressed. This haiku in particular struck me as wonderful, since I've always liked the image of tattered wings. Goodness knows why, but it's always stuck with me, and so will this haiku and its wonderful imagery. Keep it coming! ~PMC |
| TiEka Koniku 2003-11-11 ch 1, | abusethats really sweet. i feel sorry though. my bf(shazaam).. yeah he tripped me, but we still together so all is good. haiku's are really hard to write. well done. *TI* |
| MR.SEAN 2003-11-11 ch 1, | abuseum, ouch. falls hurt. Just ask my girl friend she tripped over my leg and almost broke her nose, and that was the same week as the homecoming dance. Score! |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-09-30 ch 1, | abuseNICE! wings are fun |
| Anagronax 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseVisual. I'll be checking out the rest. Thank you for the review and I have a lot more poems. Just check my account. |
| I'm leaving fictionpress 2003-07-19 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet... I likes. |
| Needa S 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abuseAwesome job! Do keep writing you are very talented!! |
| Stoffpferd 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abuseWow...I love the image and the description. Great job! ~ to a bottomless chasm ~ wow! ~Stoffpferd~ |
| Lidless Eye 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat description! |
| Allaesandra 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseVery simplistic it creates a great effect. |
| PurpleLilac 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseMy heart flutters down too, Its all because of you. You have never let me view this haiku, Only to post it online before you do! Sobs! |
| Keep it 100 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abuseGreat imagery. ~Heart of the Sword |