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| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful poem. I love the use of adjectives in this - it's very vivid and full of life. Wonderful. Keep writing! :) |
| atreju 2004-03-29 ch 1, | abusepretty. what i like most is your summary of this. whoever said princesses are that classic beauty? just that simple statement speaks volumes about who you are; to me anyway... |
| A Beautiful Nightmare 2004-03-07 ch 1, | abuseI love the metaphor... I truly understand it... |
| arbysauce93 2004-02-03 ch 1, | abuseUsually I don't like poetry similar in format to this, but I really do like this one. It is very vague, and yet you managed to, in six lines, form beautiful imagery. Great job, and keep up the good work! |
| MR.SEAN 2004-01-25 ch 1, | abuseDude thats cool, I've been tryin to write haiku they are okay I could always use a tip! |
| Kelpylion 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAmazing that you created that entire image in such complexity in only 34 syllables. 34...amazing. |
| elfianjoy 2003-11-20 ch 1, | abuseLovely. |
| Mime 2003-10-17 ch 1, | abuseFirst, this piece was so beautiful! I don't know how you do it, but I could never write like that! Secondly, the answer to the riddle poem was jasmine. You were right about the first stanza being jazz. The rest of the piece basically describes the word 'mine', and then linking the two seperate words together and changing the spelling. Thanks for taking time to read it, even if you didn't get the answer. |
| mizu no kokoro 2003-09-30 ch 1, | abuse^_^ me wants to be a princess... um, did i just type that? O.o i scare myself. |
| Anagronax 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI read this and I thought: Hey, this sounds like a chocolat cupcake... I am weird... I know... |
| The Black Rider 2003-07-23 ch 1, | abuseBreathtakingly beautiful. There are no words other than those to describe it... |
| swift sky silver 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abusewow, you have a great range of vocabulary for these poems=0) |
| Crucified Sanctity 2003-07-15 ch 1, | abuseSounds to me like a princess of dreams... Y'know like you can never get to her... - Crucified Sanctity |
| Lidless Eye 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, great haiku... great descriptions, as well. Keep writing! |
| PurpleLilac 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseSounds dreamy...sweet little princess... |