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| MR.SEAN 2004-01-25 ch 1,  | abuseNow That is cool! |
| Lina Inverse 2004-01-16 ch 1, | abuseWow! I could really visualize the whirlpool- and I mean REALLY visualize it! |
| Premeditated Chaos 2003-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI'm quite attatched to this pair of haiku. It very much describes my mood at the moment...I feel very angry and chaotic, so reading something like this helps me ground myself and get clear. Much thanks ^_^ Thanks also for the review! |
| Desert Wrath 2003-11-23 ch 1, | abuseI really liked how whirlpools are described in this haiku! It shows the beauty of them and their danger at the same time! Great job! -Desert Wrath |
| The B.A.T 2003-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI could actually envision the rage of the whirlpool as it thrashes about in a cyclone of brute force and indiscriminate power. This was very vivid. -Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman |
| l'orage d'absinthe 2003-09-12 ch 1, | abusePretty good, I love the word maelstrom. It doesn't flow as well as some, but it's still cool, I like the mental image it gave me! :) |
| Anagronax 2003-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI hate it when I encounter whirlpools in Heroes of Might and Magic 3... They always take away a large chunk of my soldiers... Oh... wait a minute... Ermm... yah, I liked this haiku. It has something majestic to it. Plus you reminded me that there is a good game somewhere on my shelves... |
| Soupaflyyy 2003-07-27 ch 1, | abuseHey, that was really cool! |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2003-07-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, that is just unbelievable. |
| swift sky silver 2003-07-18 ch 1, | abuseonce again, this is great=0) |
| obsidian katana 2003-07-16 ch 1, | abuseawesome piece! nice alliteration and personification. i like that a lot. lovely imagery and description, almost gived the whirlpool a personality of its own. great job! keep up the superb work! |
| Needa S 2003-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWow... outstanding piece! |
| Lidless Eye 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abuseAwesome haiku. You're a very good writer! |
| Shadafakup 2003-07-09 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful choice of words.. The whirlpool was aptly described.. I loved the images.. Awesome piece.. |
| PurpleLilac 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseIt's amazing!!How did u find the words? |