I really enjoyed reading this story, even though it was a little confusing at times and it didn't quite end how I wanted it to.

Still I think it is a great story.

Thanks for keeping me entertained!
~Ms-Block

I've just spent the last 3 days completely enthralled by all of your writing you've shared here.
Now, I just finished this and I want to go back and re-read everything all over again.
The whole plot of this was amazing, I'm still trying to wrap my head around it. x).
It's been awhile since you've posted anything new though :(.
Well, I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love everything you've written and possibly can't live without it now. x). And, to thank you for sharing. :).
If you ever add anything new in the future, I'll be looking for it x)

How depressing. I was really rooting for a Jarnal & Teeo ending. Oh well, you can always write a sequel involving them :) (hint hint)

Yu were right, this story is really twisted. But it's a good story. A little arsh sometimes but I read it from start to end in… two days? wow, go me. Anyway. I was so glad to find that Teeo wasn't a little wuss and that he actually had some sens of humour. Those character you find everywere who seems innocent and don't have any backbone when it comes to relations just make me want to puk. Teeo was just enough of a gentle person and of a plot master to fit in my "perfekt character list".


Now I'll go see what else you have in stock :disapear in a cloud of dust:

OH my god! I love this story. It is the best story in the whole entire world! :). Even thought Teeo and Jarnal didn't end up together it was still the best story. The characters and everything are written so well, but I wish Jarnal would've said goodbye to Teeo. I just can't get over how good it is. You should have this made into a published book and become rich and famous.LOL

Drinking that amount of Absinthe would be really dangerous. On top of that the two of them would be hallucinating like crazy.

a great story. pretty powerful all on its own even without the sudden plot twist... it sure as hell added the 'omg, wtf' factor; although i can't see how teeo could have orchestrated the whole plot at that age. the pedo scene that you did way back whatever-chap-it-was was fantastic as well. brutal but in the 'you can't tear your eyes away from the text' way (exactly like how teeo can't tear his eyes from the screen). good job on the whole. will start reading your other stories.

butbutbut... I wanted him to be with Jarnal **whines** mehh... it's just... it's so uncool **sniffle** I want them to be together. And I hate that Jarnal loves someone else. And grr... GR! JarnalxTeeo forever. **grumpy** This ending depresses me. ;_;

Hehehe... wondering if he is real XD I'm glad that Teeo at least was wondering it - it's always good when I feel like I'm on the same page as the main character ^^;; whenever there's a string of really freaky coincidences or something and the character is blind to it, it drives me crazy - it makes me very happy that this story does not hold to that.

I'm thinking that it's likely that Jarnal is real, but it's good to know that Teeo is as uncertain about it as I am. **grins** happy days. ^^

I absolutely loved this story!! Especially the blooper scenes, they cracked me up...I couldn't stop reading until the very end...great job!!

:(I wish Jarnal and Teeo were together. But alas, it could not be and that makes me sad. At least the end is a bit happy though. Great story.

" The dwarf glared at the boy. "Listen! Little boy..."

"No..." Atrick stood at the same height as stout man. "I'm growing. You're little. Not me." "-you

BWAHAHAHAHA! I cracked up at this part (great story btw, spent hours reading it)...Atrick is so cute. Anyway, great job.

I love it!

:stares at the screen in awe: I read about two-thirds of this yesterday, and the rest today. Words probably can't begin to explain how much I enjoyed reading this story.

The characterizations were great... especially Teeo. He may have been dense here and there...but he really made this story what it is...and of course the scenes with him and Jarnal. :winks: The character dynamics were awesome too! I like the way Teeo and Jarnal seemed to change as the story progressed, it kept me wanting to read more.

The plot was very interesting. At first, I thought this would be just another "adult" story...but there was much more to it. The complex histories each of the characters had made a great addition to the story, the plot-twists, it all just flowed together wonderfully.

And of course :drumrolls: the sex-scenes. I've never read a story with this kind of detail, yet it never felt raunchy. Those scenes have by far surpassed ANYTHING I've read in the past, and that deserves two big thumbs up from me :gives thumbs-up:

In conclusion, I found this to be a phenomenal piece of work. I'm definitely looking forward to reading some of your other stories. Ciao! =)

oh, this story is amazing! gods, i'm late in reviewing...