thats really sad! its really realistic and eerie! peoples eyes r very powerful they can b seductive and deceptive and cunning and make a person seem flawless! ok im babbling so ill shut up! just well done and keep writing!!
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You really described how it feels.


~Heart of the Sword

O! This was another simply marvelous work! In every aspect of the word! Brilliant, plain and simple! I love your style of writing, and all of your works, you are on my favorites list!

~*~AbunaiChikara

Another amazing poem... you've got me in awe once again of your talents. The first line of the final stanza was just fantastic. Incredible. Keep writing.

Awesome. Yeah, I would imagine this is how it feels after a breakup. Nice work.
-Frodo

sad...but a good poem1! :D keep it up
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