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| content with rhyme 2003-09-18 ch 1,  | abuseI really hate cloudy days! I even wrote a silly pome about it entitled 'Where did the sun go?' Hehe, well, anyways... you did an excellent job on your first tanka! Congradulations. :o) |
| swirlygirl 2003-09-07 ch 1, | abusethis was really nice...could you explain what a tanka is...please |
| Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abusenice...though i live for cloudy days and the rain. |
| Wasted Postage 2003-07-11 ch 1, | abuseO...I can definately relate to this. Here in Virginia there are days that are simply hazy and gray. I hate those days. Lovely work! ~*~AbunaiChikara |
| Keep it 100 2003-06-30 ch 1, | abuseGreat work. You're good at tankas. ~Heart of the Sword |
| obsidian katana 2003-06-29 ch 1, | abusewonderful piece! nicely written. yeah, i hate cloudy days also and long for even like one small ray of sunlight to shine through and brighten life a bit, but oh well... nice describing it and feelings also (like tanka should) they're fun, aren't they? you should write more. (hey, i should write one about how i feel about piano recitals, lol) anyway, i'm rambling kinda. great job! glad to see that you're posting more again. keep on writing! |