|Reviews for twilight of eternity|
| John Ink 8/21/05 . chapter 1
yea,yea. Okay. Decent. wow. This is getting pretty good. Hey, this isn't bad. A poem that stands out on FictionPress? I love it! it's so... Okay. slowing down again. pretty good. I like it. Fireflies...
The whole thing is good, but the middle is great. Very moving.
| Nelson Wells 7/9/05 . chapter 1
There is a lot of filler on FP, but this isn't it. This is a very good poem. I loved the detail and description. Metaphors are my favorite :) haha, anyway, good job.
| CrazyCheerChick 7/3/05 . chapter 1
wow. Absolutly amazing...you decsibed everything in complete detail...amazing! Keep it up! Kelsey
| Ina-Shiri 5/22/05 . chapter 1
dat was nice. u described da scene well.
| Perilous Escapist 3/19/05 . chapter 1
This was pretty good. Lovely imagery, I have to say. Keep writing.
| eyes of sky 2/11/05 . chapter 1
I love your style. It flows seamlessly between memories, dialogue, metaphors and many other aspects of language. I especially liked the part about "seeking the man beneath the flesh". It was about physical and mental love all at the same time.
| Angel 864 12/30/04 . chapter 1
Aw... that was so beautiful. I really enjoyed it, the basic yet complex structure, the words. Nice job.
| Lane Stein 9/24/04 . chapter 1
I love your poem. Beautifully written, I like the line, "In that forgotten moment of a dream" and the last two lines as well. Very nice imagery and word usage, flows beautifully!
| Falling For You 8/28/04 . chapter 1
Wow, I loved this! The feel of your writing flows so well and I loved the figurative language you used, especially these liens:
A day I remember like summer's last breath,
The last of the light falling into the arms of the night,
| scarlet sunrise 8/9/04 . chapter 1
I found this poem very moving! Your writing style is certainly graceful, not to mention enjoyable. I don't know what to say, except that I like it. Great job.
| x0x-Still-Alive-x0x 7/6/04 . chapter 1
cool poem )
| marshbar960 6/23/04 . chapter 1
very impressive and relatable! loved your choice of verbiage and the vivid imageries you used to help develop your overall mood!
however, i do have one criticism: i really don't think you need the comma after "other" in your first line. just my opinion but please don't let it push your button. other than that, i thought that the poem was a magnificent work of art! thanks for sharing and please keep writing!
| Songs of sorrow 5/16/04 . chapter 1
Well done, nice use of language and all that.
| Casey-Calli 5/6/04 . chapter 1
ooh, i liked that a lot. i loved all of the description. would you please review my 'angel in disguise'?
| snow fox 3/30/04 . chapter 1
magnificent...truly a work of art...