cool that was really good.

I like the imagery of the tears flowing down the stairs into the streets, into town...really creative.

Hey another great poem. So full of passion and great imagery. Good consistent structure and careful choice of words.

Keep it up!

Great imagery! I really liked how you put this. I'm gonna go read more now. :o)

excellent ending! i loved this one.

hey thats wicked good one of my favorites. keep up the good job writing. if u want r+r my stuff ( i suggest "hurt" i just wrote it i know its kinda long but check it out and lemme know what u think)oh yeh and if u like that review some others too peace

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I really liked your poem! The ending's really great.