|Reviews for Lightning|
| joie 610 8/4/03 . chapter 1
good poem! i like it :) thunder and lighting are so beautiful... it was written well, but i feel as if the ending was a little... shaky? anyway, good job!
| Arayuldawen 7/3/03 . chapter 1
man, this is awesome. It really seems as if you were really lightning, talking about your feelings.
| lainxauber 7/2/03 . chapter 1
So true...and strangely enough, the perfect murderer can also heal uncurable afflictions. Lightning is incredible, the power it has. Very good poem.
| I'm leaving fictionpress 7/1/03 . chapter 1
... *blinks* I'm sorry... It's a bad day for me now, I'll read it again sometime...
From this, I would say you are good at this. It flows pretty well.
| GoldMetalGymnast 7/1/03 . chapter 1
that is a really cool poem I can feel like that sometimes especially at my younger brother...
continue that awesome writing!
| Keep it 100 6/30/03 . chapter 1
Only a handful can do something like this.
Heart of the Sword
| Baby Milo 6/30/03 . chapter 1
SCAREY! But really good!
| charolastra 6/30/03 . chapter 1
OOh. Interesting perspective there! I like. Good job with the rhyming; it flows pretty well most of the time, notably this verse, which I really liked:
When I'm in anger and rage
There's no escaping me
The world is your cage"
Some verses need a bit of tweaking, as they don't flow quite as well as the rest, but overall, it's a great poem. Good job!
| mizu no kokoro 6/30/03 . chapter 1
man, there was lightin' over the weekend when i was swimming! or was it thunder...?
| Falling Stars 6/30/03 . chapter 1
This was very, very good! I never thought of lightning like that before but I like the idea!
| Free-Writer 6/30/03 . chapter 1
Great style and imagery. it captured lightning perfectly. keep writing!
| not sure yet 6/29/03 . chapter 1
very kool and interesting, love the imagery, muchly enjoyed, excellent job