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| chiisaisaru 2008-07-22 ch 8, anon. | abuseWOW I just noticed that you started writting again. What are the odd? is actually one of my favorite stories. I still saving the link just when you start it up again. Once every year I go back and read it. I am so sad to hear that you stopped it. I will continue having it in my save links just in case that it does come back all new. I wish you the bestest luck and I hope I see an update. PS thank you for your reference to other stories. |
| Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-12 ch 7, | abuseWow!! OK, so there's nothing in the way anymore!! That's great!! So now they can be happy and together now, yes? =D I'm definately loving your writing style. Kudos to you! ^_^ |
| Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-12 ch 6, | abuseHaha, I love Vi. |
| Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-12 ch 5, | abuseDun dun dun... and the plot thickens!! I'm sure it's Amanda... Thankfully, I have the next three chapters already at my disposal, so no cliffhanger for me! =P |
| Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-12 ch 4, | abuseAww :( Poor Reeve!! I wonder what's going to happen now...? I have a feeling Vi's gonna do something really bad... o_O |
| Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-12 ch 3, | abuseWhoo hoo! That's pretty cool, and... wow. =D Looks like Reeve's a lucky dude, ne?? I'm wondering who this other guy Adam was with is, though. If his mum's so overprotective... I wonder. ^_^ |
| Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-12 ch 2, | abuseHoly wow, that's amazing. I'm confused, though. Darn Adam, who has to fry my brain in thinking about him. =/ Whe, onto the next chapter! |
| Tsuyunoinochi Koukyo 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseHaha, fabulous storyline~!! I'm a little uncertain about the tall... super tall guys were never my forte, so I'm a little iffy towards Reeve at the moment. However, I like his personality! I also love the name Adam, so you've got me!! =D Violet's amazing. =D I know that Adam's gonna turn out gay, because if he wasn't there would be no story. However, I wonder how he'll get there? As always, I love your writing. |
| The Aquatic Chewbacca 2007-02-25 ch 8, | abusethe hell? CONTINUE, GOSH DARN IT! this story is friggin' awesome!! it DOES NOT suck! i repeat, IT DOES NOT SUCK!! dear lord, if you think this fic is horrible, i honestly don't know what you'd think of my crappy writing... so please, please, please, please continue!! you only need, like, one more chapter!! ONLY ONE MORE!! you can just have them kiss and make up!! everyone will be happy, except for Amanda, but that's okay, coz nobody ever really like her anyway! you don't even need to think of a suitable punishment for Adam (who i HATE), just make him buy Reeve a really, really expensive dinner! CONTINUE! just one more update! PLEASE! -kon |
| Soulful Tragedy 2006-12-25 ch 7, anon. | abuseYou are an amazing author and though I'm not entirely sure you will get this review I wanted you to know that I think the world of the piece. It touches my heart because I went through exactly the same situation as Reeve. It wasn't as magickal and ended horribly in a most amusing fashion... Anyway! This isn't about my love life! ^^ You have an amazing ability! You have a golden sense of humor and a very accurate perspective about everything. I am very sad to hear that this has lost your attention. D= I hold your ability to write "slash" in the highest regard! Best wishes to you in all your endevors. (P.S. - Forgive any spelling and grammatical errors. I have a lot of pain killers in my system. I just had my tonsils removed and can hardly see straight, lol.) |
| paputsza 2006-11-07 ch 8, | abuseThis is the biggest bloody tragedy in the history of the world. On levels even. It just made me feel sad, then optimistic, then sad, then kinda happy, then angry and miserable, and then a little happy, and then angry at the world. And BTW when it comes to the point when you've passed the climax of a slash fiction and come to the resolution what people usually do is they put one chapter in of smut filled lust(about as long as your a.n.) and write "and they lived happily ever after" at the end. It's a simple concept. |
| paputsza 2006-11-07 ch 6, | abuseI'd say adam needs to be made into a woman in one deep cut, but then this wouldn't be slash. |
| paputsza 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abusei'm just glad that someone's finally putting out the problems of gay giants living in america. |
| AmorphousHeart 2005-10-25 ch 8, | abuseT.T NO!! You ::must:: keep writing. I swear to ** jesus that this is the best fic I've ::ever:: read. *whines* Though I have been reading your other fic (which I LOVE beyond all insanity, too), but I do hope you continue this wonderful story. *huggles* -S. |
| of-all-the-stupid-things 2005-08-11 ch 8, | abusewhat i got to the end for that! argh, there wasnt even any SEMI-closure or anything! damn you woman. good thing theres still Thoughts Without Words. |