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| Just Wolf 2003-07-01 ch 1,  | abusei loved all the metaphors. the moon was such a good way to put it. "My ribbon's untied"...great line, so sensual and powerful and tempting. that was a n amazing poem, far too poetic to be called a story |
| Angerona 2003-06-30 ch 1, | abuseO_o This was wonderfuly, amazing, imaginative. One of the best things i have seen all week aday and let me tell you i read alot of poems in aday. I love the part about moom and the night. Amazing, really great the personifactaion of everything gives it this...life that it wouldn;t have other wise. again really great work. :D ~Angerona the Goddess of Death~ P.S Only when we start looking back will we start walking into walls. |