Hello!
I loved this chapter! To bad you don't have any more chapters I can read. Well, I'm off to read your onther fic! ^__^ I loved this fic and i really won't you to contunie it! Your my favr4oite author! Your so good with suspense! ^__^ well, gotta go so see YA! And don't worry I know the elf girl is now name Eilie. I figured it out. hehe.

^__^ COL!
My favroite charcter is the elven girl. ^__^ Is her name Elie? I didn't really didn't get it. Please tell me. ^_^ Darn that man in the shadows! wELL, i LOVED THIS CHAPTER AND i'M GOING ON THE SECOND, SO BUH-BYE! i LOVE THIS FIC!

Hello!
Okay, I should give you an award. This proluoge is the best I've ever read! OMG! I can't believe it! Thye proulouge is so awesome! I really want to go onto your next chapter, so I leave you with this okay! ^__^ I loved this prolouge. ^__^

pretty good keep it up. oh and do you happen to play magic causeif you do i like the name