I love the last line... it is just the whole point of reading the story!

This is so sad! But it's really moving...very well-written :) The characters have been established really well...they even seem real...

This is so well-written and emotional. Very good title. Good story.

Whoa. That last line...so shocking. So beautiful. So meaningful. And the entire thing was lovely...*stunned look* I know a bit about being trapped in a relationship, having had some experience of that earlier this year, but not to the extent of the girl in your story. Anyhow, great job. _

*Clarie*