... hm... I don't know; I like it. Oh, by the way... most poets come from people with tragic pasts. u u; You're not alone, though I suppose I'm too young to actually know. >

that was wicked good maybe one of my favorites. keep up the good job writing. if u want r+r my stuff ( i suggest "hurt" and " i am young an living" i just wrote those and i know both of them are kind of long but check it out and lemme know what u think)oh yeh and if u like that review some others too i would appreciate it. good job with your poem peace

.:recalcitrant:.

ok, the ending kinda makes me wonder a little, but i'll keep all comments to myself. but it's not really that bad. it's pretty good for being "poorly written" and "horribly done"