I enjoyed reading this story. I read the La Cinq series before this and I definitely saw the progression you have made as a writer. This story seemed a bit disjointed at times and I didn't know whose POV you were writing in because you frequently changed. That being said the La Cinq series does not have these problems at all. I think that's marvelous progress as a writer. Great job!! If you ever do decide to revise this I would suggest being more clear of the point of view and make it flow easier not jump around. You definitely don't have to follow my suggestions it's just an opinion. I still enjoyed reading about Alex and Eve!! :-)

I really like the idea behind this and the plot, but the writing needs a lot of work, however i know this is your first fic and the quality of the writing in lc2 is great, so i think you should definately go over this, becasue it could be amazing!

FANTASTIC! The characters were very real, and made mistakes just like people do, and got over them the same way. Thanks so much for that. The romance was really sweet too. One thing that would make reading easier and the story flow better would be sections dividers when you switch scenes and/or POVs. I could always figure out what was happening, but it would have been smoother. anyways, great story. I off to read the sequel!

cool...it was a good story

Great story! Good job on it!:]

OMG! This story was awesome. I found it on SKOW awards and I am REALLY glad I read it.

"It was a girl, he saw, dressed expensively in mourning."

okay, soon as i read that i stopped reading this chapter, not because i was bored or some rubbish like that but because I love that sentence.

It's one of those magnificent ones where so little is written but so much is said. mostly the second half of the sentence anyways. okay, i just HAD to tell you how beautiful that sentence is. now, I'll go read the rest of the chapter. :D

This is an awesome story..I know you wrote it 3 years ago..and im here reviewing after 3 years..its just that i read this story today and thought that it was amazing..by the why did Guy delete the messages?

aaww?? but he was so good at doing his job! hahaha how old is she? like twenty-eight?

Loved it!

a nice story!

GREATall ur stories r good!:):):)

oh i loved ur story... vry excitin wit all the suspensiness n love hehe aww so cute! thanks n thanks for the happy ending! love ya x x x

WOW. Great story...

Very nice story... she must really love this guy if she's willing to forgive him so easily time after time... ah, well, at least they got their happily ever after...