I really loved this story.

Aw, how cute. I love Cal and Alex. But somehow it doesn't feel right to leave Mikey's part in such a unfinished way. Anyways, great job. I love it.

:( POOR MIKEY! That makes me so sad... He makes me think of the awesome-ness that is Angel... From RENT? Yeah, THAT amazing. I need to finish reading this, still. Sorry I can't read this is in one day. I normally would, but I've had things to do. YAY!! I HAVE AWESOME-NESS TO READ TOMORROW!

NEEDS TO FINISH TOMORROW!

Well it's obvious you've never had sex before. The scene with Gary and the maids was absolutely disgusting and like something you'd see in a B-grade ** flick. Not to mention, it was degrading to women, not at all anatomically accurate, and also incredibly sexist.

First of all, women don't "squirt" all over the place and they definitely don't leak "vaginal fluid" like a goddamn faucet. And while we're at it, the sight of a "hot hunk of flesh" does not automatically cause a woman to lose all inhibitions. Virgin/** complex much?

And if a woman was to have anal sex with a bedpost (not to mention double penetration), she would be torn bloody. Most likely, the lining between her anus and ** would be torn apart.

I'm sure it was great fun to write a scene in which a hetero male "regains" his manhood by ** two vaginas (because that's what you've reduced the maids to). If you were trying to be ironic and comical and purposely distort a sex scene, then I think you not only missed but you now come off as a misogynistic and sexist, not to mention a terrible writer. If you seriously thought that was how people had sex, then if you're a woman, I fear for your health; if you're a man, I fear for the mental and physical health of the women you "**."

Oh. My. God. It's beautiful, just beautiful. I honestly don't know what to say. Just, wow.

It's funny, but one of the things from this story that I will carry with me for the longest will be Alex's unfinished sketch as a memento of their first declaration of love.

I don't know what to say.

That was so cute! I really enjoyed reading it. A good balance of angst and fluff. Although Mikey didn't show up much, I think he was my favourite character :P Other than Alice, of course. Loved it!

i don't know what you're talking about, this was not that bad. it was actually quite good and i really mean that. so stop being down on yourself, *sticks out tounge*

damnit, FINALLY!

and i'm glad they got greg back, he's such a jerkface.

The love for this story...truly knows absolutely no bounds. I want to be Alice...seriously I plan on raising my children seeing them establish families and then promptly going out in a blaze of glory in Tijuana doing coke off a crack whores **. I lol-ed almost constantly while reading this. It's totally getting favorited. Loved it!

:D Cute. Lovable. Favourited.

Aw it was such a sweet ending and I loved the story.

XEX

Squee! I just love cuteness! (Especially when it reminds me of how me and mine got together...) Now I'm going to go to your page and see if you wrote anything else as lovely! Thanks, and keep writing!

can't help but think about a baby blue care bear with an inch of kittenlike fur.

yeah, sex scenes usually involve something below the waste. Just had to mention. But yeah it's all adorable.