I liked how you closed this piece: ‘Just a reminder’ it was strong and forceful and it made me, the reader, really look at the notion of death, which is a hard thing to face.

The poem was short, direct, and to the point, and I think it would have improved it if you had explained more about Glenn Quinn let the reader see how important they were to you. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Hahaha I love it, awesome poem XDD (I know, I'm so deep)

Simple, but depp, oops, I mean deep. Life is like a review - now that is deep. Why review it, if life is a review. Now THAT is deep.

Short and straight to the point.

Haha... Simple, but true.