absolutely beautiful.

kinda tired...havent reviewed your stuff in awhile... nice and spiff ybut what does it ahve to do with curtains?

i loved the imagery, esp in the first verse. some of your phrases were genius, and some of them were appaling. eg. genious:"bitter wine of the repressed." appaling: "amisdt the drizzly curtains/by an invisible misery's actors." the first line was beautiful, powerful and striking. the second was cliched, dull and unapealing. but still, it was a feckin' brilliant poem, and i applaud you for it.

another awesome poem! wonderfully written, i really love your imagery. nicely flowing, great word choice. gives me this angsty, dark, despondent feeling. i like that. great job! keep on writing!

Kudos! This is what I call a masterpiece.

powerful... your word choice is truly admirable.

It seems in this poem you have used all of the intense words that grace our language. Wonderful groupings and phrases. Like your other work is creates vivid images. It's like one of those poems that I have to read several times to truely experience it. Beautiful.

Look to the Stars,

Oriana Amadis

Those omniscient crimson rags...

I love your writing! I know you like mine, but yours is amazing! the words you use. Argh, this is so brilliant.

Shades to the forgotten haze that lies beyond!

I love this poem. Argh!

This is great! I like all the descriptive words and phrases. Keep it up!

The images you used and the detail was so great. You really have a large talent.

Heart of the Sword