beatiful... just beautiful.

so sad...but wonderful.

Wow, this one sent shivers down my spine. Amazing! Keep it up you are great.

This story was recommended to me, and I'm glad it was. Very nicely done!

A poignant, sad piece to be sure. *brushes a few tears from his eyes* Very emotionally charged. I really enjoyed it, even if it did tug at my more unpleasant emotions. Keep it up, Seras, this was wonderful!

I think I'm gonna cry! That was beautiful. Might wanna cut down on the swearing though.

After reading “Dreaming of a Reality” I decided to read a few more of your works. This is lovely, filled with emotion without being sappy, and I believe now more than before that you ought to write more than one shots.

... oh wow... *eyes tear up*

This is just amazing writing...

This is a great story. It's so emotional. Almost made me cry.

WOW.

Is about all I can manage right now I'm afraid. Definately added to favorites though!

Great stuff!

Spawny

that was so sad! i almost started to cry. all those feelings, and the pain that i knew they were feeling. that story had a vary big impact. i hope a lot of people get to read it.

Wow, this is so great and written wonderfully. It gave me the shills reading it. Keep up the good work ;-)

Wow... that was incredibly sad!

nice. cool beeping... :-) a lot of swearing though. it disturbed me a little, but then again, it adds some humor to the story. i like it.

My Gosh, Seras. Excellent story! Very sad just like you said it would. You have talent. lol. I wish i could critique this story but i would have to stop trying not to cry first. lol. You know me. One thing... the whole "damn it to hell"... nice touch. Were you quoting me? not that i care. lol.

Love Always -

Arashi