 MelGrl 2007-07-30 . chapter 3Wow, lots of drama, but please update soon. |
 icyaznangel 2006-01-21 . chapter 1 whoa. creeper. there like a school names Westmount Jr. High in my city and buncha mah friends go there. haha |
 Teresz 2003-07-12 . chapter 5some of this seems unrealistic, like how Jen moaned at the rape...was she a virgin? If she was, it would havd really hurt her, but anyway...it's very suspenseful. Keep it up! |
 Reviewer 2003-07-11 . chapter 5 I really don't think this is the best story ever, but I do like how you have multiple stories going on. Not many people do that in their stories, they tend to go on one track. But it's okay. |
 queen of pain 2003-07-11 . chapter 5wow, what's eve's deal? is she really just trying to help stacy? because if she ends up killing brad she's gonna be in all kinds of trouble. humm, i wanna find out who the rapist is, but i guess that doesn't come til later. ahh update i wanna find out what the deal is with tommy and kat! i really like this story, i know ive said it before but there it is
--mollie |
 queen of pain 2003-07-10 . chapter 4wow. i really like this story. something's always going on. it's like a soap opera only with a good plot. aww i really love david he's too cute for words.. hmm whats the deal with tommy? is he jealous that david's with kat or is there something about tommy and kat's relationship that we dont know about.. eek they're my favorite characters.. aw i hope eve and stacy gang up on brad, and i wanna see what happens with jen too, so yeah, well update!
--mollie |
 Teresz 2003-07-09 . chapter 4hm...very interesting. My friend and I have been discussnig this one and we have come to some interesting potential conclusions. |
 queen of pain 2003-07-07 . chapter 3oh thank god. that other review got me thinkin david could end up being the rapist but that seemed to have ruled him out. he's just too dorkily sweet.. but now i really wanna see who it is, and find out whats the deal with eve and why she's so pissed off.. hehe.. okay great chapter!
--mollie |
 Teresz 2003-07-07 . chapter 3is Jen gonna fall in love with the rapist? That would be one interesting spin on things. Anywho, great. I can't wait for thenext chappie! I'm gonna add this to my favs list. I like it. There are lots of typos, but that's normal. Hey, if you want I can kinda be like beta? I love doing stuff like that. And it realy makes a difference. I wuoldn't change any content, just fix silly typos. It's up to you. If you want, email me rockrules@comcast.net Can't wait!! |
 MidoriVaca 2003-07-04 . chapter 2I love it. Keep um coming! ^_^ |
 Teresz 2003-07-03 . chapter 2vrry interesting. Several typos but who doesn't make typos. I can't wait to see more. WHo is this Eve girl? She sems very...mysterious! Poor Samantha and Tommy! |
 queen of pain 2003-07-03 . chapter 2hey! great second chapter. hah brad's an ass, i don't know who eve is but she's awesome.. and im glad tommy didn't do it. humm what else.. oh i love the whole popular girl/dork relationship going on that's adorable.
--mollie |
 Nikki 2003-07-03 . chapter 2 This mystery rapist intrigues me... what if it's David! He's a "nerd" Tommy was popular. Tommy probably picked on him a lot. Tommy was drunk it could have been easy to get his necklace, plus David is smart he could resort to sneaky measures to get the necklace. lol sorry I'm just thinking things through. I didn't think I'd like this story it seemed like another teenage angst thing but actually it's pretty good. Keep going, UPDATE SOON |
 queen of pain 2003-07-02 . chapter 1wow. fast start to a story. teehee i like. anywho. aww man i really hope somehow tommy didn't do it. update soon |