This is my favourite out of all that I have read so far.. Wow.. It reached out to me.. I especially liked the middle stanza.. I adored these lines :
"Found a box to bury my joys
Sent them to unknown address"
I have always meant to say them, but never found the correct expression.. You manipulated your vocab very well in the piece.. It was certainly perfectly crafted.. A touch painful.. But I loved it.. Great images in the first stanza and the last lines are mind-blowing.. Perfect, just perfect.. =)Write more man..

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This would have to be another favourite of mine. Very elegantly written. I loved the second stanza especially. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Beutiful and sad -- I really love your descriptions of environments and how well they link with the feelings of the Poetic Person, you do it with much ease... Love the sentiments you are able to convey through so few words. Wonderful as always.