Yes, it's definitely dramatic!

interesting! the beginning was cool :) i think maybe if it was longer and you described more of what happens/happened, it would be really cool. anyway, good work!

good

This was definitely awesome. I loved it. "Oh the pain I felt, I saw the guilty walk free" That was way powerful. Keepw writing!

Damaged

I love stories and poems that people write from a point of view that seems to be totally alien to them...these type of people are probably the best writers. I definitely put you in that category!

This is really good! Your really good at poems!

this is good, i like it.

Arayuldawen

I like this...alot. I've often thought of this, being accused of a murder I didn't commit. What an unbelievably awful situation...

It does have a dramatic quality to it. Nice work!

Heart of the Sword