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| Chronos the Cat 2004-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseWell... Did I ever read this version? ...The new begining helps tie things together a little bit better, and the new ending was quite funny... However, as for the middle... well, I know you can write better these days. You should consider writing more stories you can post! |
| CryMe16 2003-07-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute story. It took me a second to understand. |
| Kywen 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseLol, that was cute :) |