Really good! You're grandmother wrote that? Well, it was really good! Flowed wonderfully as well.

This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read... It is beyond words...

Love the last verse the best, it seems to end so well. Constructive critism; try not to do typical ryhms all the time (e.g. "me, be" , "eat, neat") instead look for colourful words. Still great poem, it leaves me with a happy feeling ^_^

The last line is just beautiful.

beautiful...I hope your grandma remembers...it really is something to be proud of.

Lovely poem you have here. Poor gramma. Yes, God will guard His own. I saw you review a certain poem about religion. And i agree with you. Mixing up different kinds of religions is just plain wrong.

That was such a good poem. I'll pray for your grandmother. Keep up the great work!
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That's wonderful. I'm so sorry about your grandmother.

I love this poem. Your Grandma is starting to forget the last couple of stanzas, I think, because I have often heard her recite the first two or three stanzas, but not after that. -sniff- LOVE IT