I feel like I could love this girl just because of her hair! :). Great work, wonderful work!

aww thats such a cute little poemzee! i realli like it! how cute it use to roam in field of clover. awesome! rockety on!

*picks herself off of floor from laughing with tears*
this was awesome...you took a 'boring' topic and turned it into a masterpiece. well done, well done. i loved the bit 'and chopped that mighty Braid of hair' excellent imagry. check out some of my stuff sometime...
chloe

Just silly and funny enough to make reading it worthwhile. Good rhythm as well.

GROAN! Dearie me, Kalariah - this is a really, uh, *interesting* um poem. Too bad I never got to meet Rover. -rolls eyes-

that was wicked good maybe one of my favorites. keep up the good job writing. if u want r+r my stuff ( i suggest "hurt" and " i am young and living" i just wrote those and i know both of them are kind of long but check it out and lemme know what u think)oh yeh and if u like that review some others too i would appreciate it. good job with your poem peace
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