Haha...interesting...why does Jesimae call him Tiger?

Hannah.

Looks interesting! Hmm, Gabriel didn't look too worried when he was introducing his gang members to Jesimae. I find it a little strange. I'd have thought he wanted to keep it a secret, or something..okay, enough rambling!
Hope you continue soon!

it's nice and well written and i;m looking forward to reading more, but|no offense| your portrayal of a gangsta isn't very realistic. i mean it's your story and the romance that's gonna go on with whoever probably won't work if he's a gangsta jerk...:D

I really like it so far. I hope you continue.

Hey girly girl! It is I. AMANDA! Muahahahahaha! Anyways, nice story! Cool idea. Can I be the living dictionary again? PLEASE?! LoL I want another chapter! Or I'll never e-mail adam for u again! lol just kidding. People probably think I'm crazy right now. Tehe. FYI to whoever's reading this, I'm Colleen(Jasmyne)'s BEST friend! Tehehe. She is such a good writer! READ HER STORIES! READ MY STORIES! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

(^_~)

~Amanda (Chunkie Funkie Munkie)~

PS. Dedicate it to the Squasslo!

Great story! I was wondering if you can review my story called Earth is under attack. THe chapters are not in order but it does have a prologue.THanks!

Bye

hey, great start, you must update soon. for my sanity. lol...not really.
~TXB

cool story. i wonder what happens. how will he discover who she really is??

update asap