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| tsym 2006-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseGreat writing. : ) |
| Gaius Corbulo 2004-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWonderful poem you have here... I read your rather conversant reviews of an awful poet's older work and decided to check your's out. The only thing I could ask of this poem would be consistency of the last lines in each stanza. Some end in questions, and others end in statements. Overall, though, that's an awfully nit-picky thing to say, and it doesn't really need to be revised to stay good. I don't need to tell you this, but keep up the good work! |
| cosmo-queen 2003-07-06 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem. Very meaningful and very well-written. The repetition was very effective too. I especially liked the last line. Good work, keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |