that was a really great story though i do wish you had done a little more with it, oh well maybe someday. i loved it though, very much, and i was wondering if you would mind if i archived it?

"He realized then he had lied to his partner had told him to stop seeing Trevor he never would have been able to do it.'
That line doesn't make much sense.

Thus far, still very interesting, but...why all the underscores? Your unique way of putting emphasis on certain words?

Most definitely interesting. Although, in a few places near the end, you have flit where it should be flitted. I like it. It's captivating.

I just read the whole story and I have to say I really liked it.

i just read this on sf and i loved it.

the ending was a little abrupt, but it fit well, and ended things on a hopeful uncertain note. if you didnt see a future for the story, im glad you ended it when you still had a good feel for it.

the tone was perfect. i loved the characters and their believable slow fall into the relationship. it helps that i love ginger guys too :). i do wonder what happened with the case, but overall i dont care, im just glad to i got to see this part of their lives. so - thank you

hey, i first read this on slashfanfiction about a lifetime ago, and it stuck with me, i was always hoping to find it again, and im so glad i did, it even had a new (and sadly final) chapter.
this fic is truly gorgeous, i'm in awe of its brilliance in fact.
i hope that one day you rediscover your muse and decide to edit or (prays for) lengthen this fic.
fabulous!

Aw, cute. I like it. Nate is adorable! Haha. Rather abrupt ending though. Much love and adoration!

I have to admit I found this story years ago and I never gave any feedback, so bad of me. I think that this story is simply amazing, it's moving and beautiful, and of course hot! I felt dismayed that it was unfinished but I was already resigned to that, so I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw that it had been updated! I'm happy that this story finally has a conclusion, even though it might seem abrupt.
I just want to thank you for this story and all the energy you've put into it. I'll still check it from time to time in hopes of sequels, but at the same time I'm content to know that this story had a closure and wasn't left hanging.
So thank you again and I wish all the best for you!

Hi, love this story and if you have finished please write a sequeal or epilogue or something.

I can't wait to read more, but what are you doing? I want to read more! Update soon!

ok so you need to update this really really soon.

Despite the fact that you haven't updated in years I am still hooked on this story and silently praying you will update it soon. I just love this story and hope you haven't given up on it. Please update
Toodles
D.R.

Oh please oh please oh please write more! i fell in love with this story... i want to know what happens next... its amzing...

Jaded

Just started reading this... I don't really have time to read much, so the first thing I see that turns me off, I'm usually outta there.

I'm still here. I LOVE your style, and I'm willing to give you a chance with your goth-boy (is it possible to be gay without having goths involved?)

When read the cop's POV though, I knew you were gonna be good. Too bad I gotta stop now and eat. More later.