 Flames and Shadows 2003-10-11 . chapter 1THAT IS SO COOL!
you really are a good writer!
Hidden Relevance told me to read it and so i did. i really like it. It got me thinking, what if a am reading this in a dream and you really are a nightmare, if so your the best. If not your the best. (I'm sorry i'm a little hyper-active.) ICE-CREAM!
anyway one of the best stories i've read. write more |
 Artima Hadanna 2003-08-13 . chapter 1It be me again - I really do like this - never thought of giving 'Nightmare' a personality and form before.
The format could use a little work, and there were some spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but once these are tidied up you will have a truly original and imaginative work to be proud of! |
 Chisa Yume 2003-07-03 . chapter 1WHOO!! Late night musings are always so entertaining!! I really like the concept of this fic. It made me think, which is always... interesting. ^-^ I wanted to know the Japanese word for nightmare, but it wasn't in my dictionary... ::pout:: I don't know why, but through all of what you wrote, I kept wondering what she would do if she actually made a friend. I'm not usually that positive, but that thought keeps coming back to me. Would her friend be cruel and harsh like she is, or something innocent and loving that she just couldn't kill. That would prove the nightmare to have a heart... interesting thought ne? I really enjoyed reading this, and look forward to any future musings you might have! Luv ya! ::glomp:: |