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| Sarah-Angel87 2003-09-01 ch 1,  | abuseI love this song/poem. I can understand the feeling the love only last a short time and is soon replaced by pain. you express yourself very well. good job! |
| KayWest 2003-08-13 ch 1, | abuseNot very good?! It's fabulous! I would also love to hear the tune, if that's possible in any way. Like I've said before, you writing is great! You are now on my favorite authors. ~KayWest |
| Lidless Eye 2003-08-06 ch 1, | abuseSeems like a well-written song! =) Good work. |
| VampiricSacrifice 2003-08-03 ch 1, | abusei love this song so much. i love all your stuff. it all flows well even if it doesnt rhyme. really good! |
| Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-07-13 ch 1, | abusei love the line Lying to tell the truth...it just sticks in my head. this would make a great song! for some reason i'm thinking guitar..piano maybe. i suck at music. don't ask me. ^^ great job. |
| suicidel angel 2003-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abusei'm terrible with music so i won't bother even trying, but on it's on it's fantastic, most of your work is (i won't say all coz i haven't read all of it) |
| Angerona 2003-07-06 ch 1, | abuseI really like it, and i find that writers opinions mean little to nothing about the actual work. IT really is great i even had my own little tune for it and everything. I found it was kinda...clique not in a bad way in a good, kinda hey i have herd this somewere before. Which is a good thing don;t get me wrong i just think with your talent you can do much better than this. Good work. ~Angerona the Goddess of Death~ Solitude would be ideal if you could pick the people to avoid. ~Karl Kraus |
| Sunflower Philosophy 2003-07-05 ch 1, | abuseFirst of all, love the poem/song/thing, I understand exactly what you mean... and the thing is, sometimes you have to hide who you are as a good thing, to protect others, not just yourself. There are many different kinds of masks we wear. Why do you prefer negative poetry- do you find more truth in it, or can you understand it better? I never used to able to write happy poetry, but now I can hardly write anything else. Back to our subject. I loved this song, and I said, can really understand what you mean. m~* Sunflower, anyone? |
| Damaged 2003-07-04 ch 1, | abuseVery deep. I relate to this... |
| not sure yet 2003-07-04 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, good flow it and i think its pretty good, it sat very well in my mind, so muchly enjoyed this, excellent job |
| Imoen 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is an incredible peice of work. I'd really love to hear the music for this if you have any in mind. Very deeply and beautifly written. |
| Random someone 2003-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this piece. Great lyrics, wonderful expression. Keep it up and I might come back to read more. |
| Faythe 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseHey, thanks for reviewing my lyrics, it's really appreciated. I'm glad I come onto this page too, these lyrics are really good. The lines "I'm just a runaway // Another coward // Who's too afraid to fall" are amazing. I dunno, there's just something that really sticks out about them. I'll have to go and find some more of your work and hopefully give another review better than this one ;) Keep writing too, I can't believe you're only 14, you put across your talent so well already! |
| Shelila 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseIt's a really good song, I really like it. I would like to habe your opinion on some of my songs if you have the time to review them! |