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| Im just jin 2005-12-23 ch 3,  | abusekya! Did you stop udating! *cwie* so sad... But if you have the time, please update because the story soudns pretty interesting! |
| satsberrine 2005-10-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseIt seems very much like the movie Anastasia, especially the direct quote about the peppermint and the rug. I loved that line in the movie. It's decently written, but the flashbacks are confusing and un-professional looking. Try to incorporate her memories. Keep writing! -Heather |
| pax 2005-05-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseoh very well done. you're writing is very exquisite! just when you write never use things like ^flashback^ etc... just write it straight away. a good reader should be able to know when they are reading about Antasia's flashback |
| books4me 2005-01-30 ch 3, | abuseYour story is very interesting. You seem to capture the feeling rather well. The story reminds me a lot of the movie "Anastasia", except for the blindness. However, it doesn't really bother me and I'd be happy to read more. I don't usually like stories where the girl's name is Anastasia (that's MY name...), but Sia is a good nickname. Good luck! |
| Nayeli 2003-10-04 ch 3, | abuseNifty... ~Nayeli |
| I am tabitha 2003-07-07 ch 2, | abusethis is cool. I can't wiat for more |
| Carina 2003-07-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseAwesome. Continue please. |
| Cerulean Dawn 2003-07-05 ch 2, | abuseIt reminds me of a the novel "Marianela." Most people don't know it because it's written in Spanish, but it's about a blind man who falls in love with the ugly girl who takes care of him. (Or as we say in Spanish class: El ciego que se amore a la mujer muy fea que cuidalo.) |
| Sapphire Tears 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was an interesting beginning, but I can't see your writing style or anything from it. Please make the next chapters longer? |
| Life loving freak 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseIt was very good I just have one complaint... MAKE IT LONGER! *gets blown down* owe. It was very good though. Life loving freak |
| DT 2003-07-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww poor girl! God wrk though |