:( spooky-ish. but well writen! yet again, good job ^_^

it would make a great riddle, but it is a bit easy

A poem about death...lovely. But really, I like how you portray it as a thief.

Great poem! I never thought of it that way, me being an elf and all. This is awesome! If this isn't your best work you must be really good! I'd love to see your BEST work sometime!

I think I've read this before...hm...

Anyway its good either way!

Keep it up!

Toodles!

~Rani~

interesting, i like it, fairly well written, nicely done

Creepy... I love it!

Very interesting subject - I like the personification of Death, expressed slightly differently. Very good. Although perhaps some structure would be good - make it a little more planned. But then I think of death as a very meticulous creature...

Wow, this is really good! Kinda makes u shudder. I love the way you wrote it.
Great job,
s.s

i like it! it was very well put together, unlike my poems ;_;

Very cool... not exactly fluid, but still interesting, referring to death as a theif.

‘Stealing your life after your last breath.’ that was my fav line. it was a really good poem.

Of all the poems you have posted, I think I like this one the most. My favorite line: "He lives to rob. He robs to live." I don't know why...I just really liked that line. You described Death's thievery so well. If this isn't one of your "better poems," I bet the one's you keep from the net are most noteworthy.
Thanks for the review!
Peace,
Tears

Wow.

I don't know what to say! Wow.

Amazing.

Very beautifully written, keep up the good work!

Please review my fantasy story, it is called "The Swordmaster". PLEASE! Also please check out some of my other poems here! PLEZE!

If you do I PROMISE to review yours!

Anyway, gtg, but keep on writing!

Toodles,

~Rani~

Like this one, rhyming's good... I think there's more to death, though than just a theif... it's a passage, moving on... I dunno. But I liked it anyway.

m~* Sunflower, anyone?