unusual but perfect metaphors and imagery to fit this idea. Deliciously bitter.

Wow is the only word I can think of to express this. Very powerful poem. Your use of imagery is amazing.

lovely. no criticsm applicable. Just... lovely.

Mia :)

Ahh, amazing. Insightful, deep. I love the comparison, with the peach. Your ending line was completely brilliant. I love it.

Twilight and Laughter,

Kelly

Wow! Each word was perfect, and you chose things that were completely original. I loved this.

Heart of the Sword

wow! those are powerful words. Great poem! reminds me of my poem the Apple

Oh wow, it's so original and so sad. Really interestingly put. GOOd job :)