short and to the point...great poem

I like it! I don't read poems very often, so I don't know much about them, but I love this one. It says so much in only three sentences.

Short and sweet! I like it very much! You didn't waste the simplicity of the poem with heavy-handed words. Nice job!

i wish i could write short poems and get to the point. such strong emotion. nicely done! hope you'll R&R my work!

whoa! what a poem!
anyway, hope you'll R&R my work too!
=summerdazed=

Very direct...nicely done :)

True. And usualy, someone's deepest hate ends out the deepest love... or not as the case may be.
I like short poems with a truth behind them. This just about sums it up.
Well done!
:)

it's so cool how people can contain such emotion in so small words .. I love this ..

I'm a fan of short poems, and this is absolutely one of the best I've seen. You've really packed all your emotions and hatred into those words, its amazing :)

Amazing how powerful a few words can be. THis is really good.
Keep writing!
s.s

Simple, but true. Nicely done.

those 10 words were really great. I lyk it.

It's short but to the point. Good. :)
-Christina
P.S. When you have time I would appreciate it if you could review my story, Hurt by Love. Thank you. :)

Wow. I like the simplicity of your writing here. In about 10 words you have summed up all the feelings of hatred and malice that can descibe an enemy.

Sometimes less is more, and in this case, it is oh so true.

As always, keep up the good work!

Toodles,

~Rani~

So true. Simplistic, but drowning in depth all the same. Very nice.