 SpawnMeister666 2003-09-11 . chapter 3Are you really only 18?
You write pretty well for someone so young. I'm totally impressed with everything I've read so far.
I dont know if you intend to continue with this story or leave it as it is, but I'd certainly like to know more about what happens next!
Spawny |
 Katharine Emily Francis 2003-08-30 . chapter 3I like it. I just think there could me a little more detail in it. |
 Princess Poodle 2003-08-27 . chapter 3Cool, i like this. Nice introduction. I think it would be great if you could possibly weave some of the first person into this. I like it how it is as wll though, it was just a suggestion!
Peace n Luv,
x Sal x
ps. thanx 4 reviewing me! I never expected it so soon after i joined! Lol! |
 Just Stella 2003-07-29 . chapter 3OHMIGOSH!
I love this stry to DEATH!
Update or make a sequel! |
 Just Stella 2003-07-29 . chapter 2Whoa!
Hmm...poor Hunter, but..go Morgan!
lol... |
 Just Stella 2003-07-29 . chapter 1Ohmigosh!
I love it!
Hmm...what could happen?
Onto the next chappie, I lurve it tho! |
 Nickolaus Pacione 2003-07-24 . chapter 3this is a tight story, very well put together. I am going to comment on all three chapters here because it would be easier to say what I want to say in a paragaph than in more than one sentence on the chapters. Keep up the strong work with this one. |
 nolongerinuse 2003-07-11 . chapter 3Is this story finished?
If it is, you might want to extend the scenes a bit to increase your intensity, let us get into Morgan's mind. You have some good descriptions though. |
 Hasan Abood 2003-07-07 . chapter 1Wow! This is awsome! Great job. By the way, thanks for reading "Guilty Pleasures":) |
 SupremeDragon02 2003-07-05 . chapter 3Bravo, Bravo. Very very good story. I loved it. It sent a chill through my spine reading it. You are an excelent writer. I hope the rest of your works are as good as this one. Well, I hope to see more of your reviews around. Take care. Keep up the good work. |