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SpawnMeister666 2003-09-11 . chapter 3
Are you really only 18?

You write pretty well for someone so young. I'm totally impressed with everything I've read so far.

I dont know if you intend to continue with this story or leave it as it is, but I'd certainly like to know more about what happens next!

Spawny
Katharine Emily Francis 2003-08-30 . chapter 3
I like it. I just think there could me a little more detail in it.
Princess Poodle 2003-08-27 . chapter 3
Cool, i like this. Nice introduction. I think it would be great if you could possibly weave some of the first person into this. I like it how it is as wll though, it was just a suggestion!
Peace n Luv,
x Sal x
ps. thanx 4 reviewing me! I never expected it so soon after i joined! Lol!
Just Stella 2003-07-29 . chapter 3
OHMIGOSH!
I love this stry to DEATH!
Update or make a sequel!
Just Stella 2003-07-29 . chapter 2
Whoa!
Hmm...poor Hunter, but..go Morgan!
lol...
Just Stella 2003-07-29 . chapter 1
Ohmigosh!
I love it!
Hmm...what could happen?
Onto the next chappie, I lurve it tho!
Nickolaus Pacione 2003-07-24 . chapter 3
this is a tight story, very well put together. I am going to comment on all three chapters here because it would be easier to say what I want to say in a paragaph than in more than one sentence on the chapters. Keep up the strong work with this one.
nolongerinuse 2003-07-11 . chapter 3
Is this story finished?
If it is, you might want to extend the scenes a bit to increase your intensity, let us get into Morgan's mind. You have some good descriptions though.
Hasan Abood 2003-07-07 . chapter 1
Wow! This is awsome! Great job. By the way, thanks for reading "Guilty Pleasures":)
SupremeDragon02 2003-07-05 . chapter 3
Bravo, Bravo. Very very good story. I loved it. It sent a chill through my spine reading it. You are an excelent writer. I hope the rest of your works are as good as this one. Well, I hope to see more of your reviews around. Take care. Keep up the good work.
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