|Reviews for Sinking, Dying|
| Taka and Keichirou 10/8/03 . chapter 1
| godawful teen-angst poetry 9/18/03 . chapter 1
OOh-good angst! I like it. A lot. You've got a lot of nice haiku on here...
| CoolBeans18s 7/13/03 . chapter 1
Amazing! Interesting style of haiku...
| teh tarik 7/6/03 . chapter 1
so angsty. But it was good..so write more!
| Psycho-kyugurl 7/5/03 . chapter 1
So many emotions...wow.
| Keep it 100 7/5/03 . chapter 1
You put this in good terms.
Heart of the Sword
| Needa S 7/5/03 . chapter 1
| Miz E. Mak 7/5/03 . chapter 1
Actually, you do not have to have 5-7-5 in an english haiku. The Japanese use onji, which are different from syllables, and cannot be compared in any way. So an english haiku's only requirement is: 3 lines and 17 syllables.
Just wanted to point that out.
| Lidless Eye 7/5/03 . chapter 1
Really cool. Keep up the good work!
| KittiBear 7/5/03 . chapter 1
Good hiaku but you have the syllables mixed up. It goes five syllables, seven syllables, five syllables. You have five, five, seven. Ah well, still good.