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   Taka and Keichirou 10/8/03 . chapter 1depressive...excellent T |
| godawful teen-angst poetry 9/18/03 . chapter 1 OOh-good angst! I like it. A lot. You've got a lot of nice haiku on here... lyv |
| CoolBeans18s 7/13/03 . chapter 1 Amazing! Interesting style of haiku... CoolBeans18s |
| teh tarik 7/6/03 . chapter 1 so angsty. But it was good..so write more! |
| Psycho-kyugurl 7/5/03 . chapter 1 So many emotions...wow. |
| Keep it 100 7/5/03 . chapter 1 You put this in good terms. Heart of the Sword |
| Needa S 7/5/03 . chapter 1 Cool..Awesome job! |
| Miz E. Mak 7/5/03 . chapter 1 Actually, you do not have to have 5-7-5 in an english haiku. The Japanese use onji, which are different from syllables, and cannot be compared in any way. So an english haiku's only requirement is: 3 lines and 17 syllables. Just wanted to point that out. |
| Lidless Eye 7/5/03 . chapter 1 Really cool. Keep up the good work! |
| KittiBear 7/5/03 . chapter 1 Good hiaku but you have the syllables mixed up. It goes five syllables, seven syllables, five syllables. You have five, five, seven. Ah well, still good. |
