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| Werecat99 2003-12-22 ch 1,  | abuseI liked that. There was something ethereal about it. Good work. And thanks for the reviews. |
| Nyaa 2003-09-14 ch 1, | abuseAs a poem, it gets to be repetitive with the swimming, part, but I could envision it working really well with a song, which is what you wrote it for, I suppose... Other than that, it's very good! I would love to hear the song sometime, if you ever record it. ^_^ |