Ah... your little teaser thing was beautifully done. The pain was so real and heartfelt!

I think your story is going to be great - I'm getting a taste of your writing style and I like what I see so far. Perhaps in the beginning of the Prologue, you lost me a few times. It was just so much information that I had to instantly absorb... but still, I'll be waiting for the first chapter eagerly!

*clapping*
Bravo!
Great story!
Um, I have a suggestion tho, but you don't have to listen - or read it for that matter. If you don't want to read it, skip this next part;

You know the sentences; "My time came when I was seventeen. I was seventeen when he was taken from me." Um, I was wondering if you should use something else instead of using seventeen twice.

I dunno. Don't listen to me. I'm kinda stupid.

Other than that, I congratulate you on a good story!