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| Lifesdream 2003-09-24 ch 1,  | abuseTouching! And i too wonder if you meant "due to you" rather than "do to you." Perhaps you should delete the long rows of astericks. Nice poem... did you show this to the subject of your poem? |
| Behind Hidden Doors 2003-08-17 ch 1, | abuseloved this one totally. but i wonder if you meant "due to you", not "do to you". but it's ok. very nice. I love these stuff, especially since i love my mom a lot too. I think i'll write something like this too. Thanks for inspiring me. Good job! write more poetry. God bless!! |