aw, finish it dammit! it sounds really really good and i'll be our friend forever of you do. hehehe, i need better bribes...

*sniff* That was beautiful. Someone is in love with Shannon! I'm so happy! I love Shannon... platonically, of course. Anyways, you rock. Peace.

...i was so happy when i found out i guessed right in sedra giving shannon the letter, but it's just 'bout been a year now a you haven't given us anything new on this! come on! just one chapter! or at least a scene? *pouts*? any scene, we can peice things together, just give us something! a crum! a bit, yes thaty would be very much loved, please? pretty plaese? with sugar on top?

*BOUNCES AROUND* ^SQUEE SQUEE^ SOO CUTE FEI!

Eks! Why haven't I reviewed this yet? I could have sword that I did...arg.

Hi! I hope you continue this, although, I just read ch.14(or was it 15?) of ATBG and I from that I guess you already did...ar I'm confusing myself! Anyway, this is really fluffy-cyoote, and I hope to see more of Ben in da near future!

when are you gonna write more on this?*puppy dog eyes* i wanna know what happens after shanons threesome. pweaase give us more.

Oh my god. That so cute. Poor Ben.I think you should continue on with this...If you do, I think in the next chap, Ben should drop this paper and Shannon should find it. This would be comical. Any who, Please comtinue this. I want to know what happens.

YAY! this is good, i felt so sorry for shannon in ATBG. he needs someone to love him, are you going to continue this please say! PLEASE SAY YES! is sedra going to be the one that finds/gives the letter to Shan?

Nieni: Oh... He's gonna find the note, isn't he? *grins*

Nite: I like pie.

Nieni: That's nice... UPDATEDNESS! *weilds spork threateningly*... Not one word about the iron... *glares in a loving fan way*

Nite: Be glad you can't see that... It actually looks quite creepy...

Nieni: *cackles* Yesh. It really does.

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aw.. he's so swet! I like him already! Dibs on Ben! SYKSYK~ he belongs to Shannon.. but yea... TELL HIM! TELL HIM U LYK HIM!! OMG! AHH!

Ohmigod!! Just tell him already...

Damn right!! Shannon deserves to be happy!

I like this story or chapter or side story... which ever you call it. Can't wait for Shannon to find out.

Hey! Just wanted to say that the letter was great. It gives off emotion so perfectly. Very well written and you've captured the human aspect of it very well. Looking forward to more.

-Alex Lain

that was so terrifically cute and sweet and sappy and somehow sad at the same time!! :D he sounds perfect for shannon, because basically (i guess) he's everything shannon wants, isnt he? :D nyeh, i like him already ^^ great ficlet thingy :D